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Re: HI!
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I am Winter. I believe all of the important information has been pointed out already. I liked your story! There were some grammar mistakes but ...
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Re: Open for critiquing
Hi there! I was hoping you could review these two for me: Title: Emma Hereford, Prologue Genre: Historical Fiction Link: Title: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I Genre: Historical Fiction ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Hei everyone
Hello Liz! Welcome to YWS! I am Winter's Twelfth Night, but you can call me Winter. What genre is Mrs. Jones? Is it a short story or a novel? I ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: I Want You -points finger-
Hi! I'm Winter. If you don't mind, I'd like your opinion on these two: Title: Emma Hereford, Prologue Genre: Historical Fiction Link: Title: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I Genre: ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Oh, herrow there!
Hello there! I am Winter. Welcome to YWS! Yay! A grammar freak! I'm like that too; I absolutely hate bad grammar. If you ever catch a grammar mistake in any ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: One More Hello!
Hello Selin! I am Winter. Welcome to YWS! You are not an native English speaker? I wouldn't have guessed! What is your first language? Another history lover!! My favorite eras ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Hello Everyone!
Hello! I am Winter. Welcome to YWS! I need to get to these posts earlier! There's not much left for me to tell you. Do you know about the groups? ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Hiya
Hello! I am Winter. Welcome to YWS! Everyone has already covered the rules... and the colors... and the questions. Hmm. What else would you like to know? PM me if ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Hello !
Hello! I am Winter. Welcome to YWS! So, you like writing episodes for Family Guy? Haha that sounds like fun! I like Family Guy but sometimes it can be quite ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford, Prologue
Emma Hereford, Prologue Flashes of troubling memories often flit in and out of my dreams; memories that I try hard to forget. In these I relive the worst moments of ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Oh thank you! You've been most helpful! I think a prologue would be the best solution. I'll get working on that. Again, thank you so much! -Winter
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Thanks for clarifying! Hmmm... I guess Emma does act rather unnatural. However there are a few crucial details not mentioned in this part of the story. I was going to ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Hey, erm i new
Hello Leyah! I am Winter. Welcome to YWS! So, what do you like to write? I bet some one has already asked you that. :D Let's see... the rules have ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: hi , everybody?
Hello mimimac! I'm Winter. Welcome to YWS! I see Rosey has gone over the rules... and the colors. What else would you like to know? Do you know about the ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Is it rude to tresspass?
Hello! Welcome to YWS! I am Winter. So, you like to write lyrics? I would love to read them! Except I'm truly awful at critiquing lyrics so I may not ...
Feb 1, 2009
